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[Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:37 am

Advertise WillMS
My first WillMS banner. Hope you like it. Please comment and tell me what I could improve on, your suggestions mean a lot.



Update 1:
Did I mess it up, or does it still look fine?
Better or worst then before?



Update 2:
Looks a bit better to the eye.



Last edited by Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:57 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Adding Update 1)
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  House on Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:46 am

I like it 8/10. I think you can some other stuff too though. :)

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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  UnknownB®yan™ on Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:49 am

Good job . I can't give ratings because I sucks at art work .
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  AirStrike on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:08 am

Wow pretty good, Nice choice of colours. Looks like you used a clipping mask. You can make the so called" fire effects" the same for left and right side so it makes it look even
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:18 am

Thanks!

@AirStrike;

Your right, I knew there was something uneven about the banner. It needs to be more "advertisement" ish. Ill add some fire effects or something to the other side, and maybe some text saying "Join Now".
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  House on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:20 am

UnknownB®️yan™️ wrote:Good job . I can't give ratings because I sucks at art work .


I am too and I give ratings. Just do it. o_o

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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Grand Fonic Hymn on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:25 am

I like the articulaticity and simplicity of the amazing artwork you presented, the words project uneasiness in the dark reflection, yet fires adorn and surround the outside, waiting for its chance to slash in, the perspicacity is splendid.

In other words :
Very creative
8.5/10
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:40 am

Equilibrium wrote:I like the articulaticity and simplicity of the amazing artwork you presented, the words project uneasiness in the dark reflection, yet fires adorn and surround the outside, waiting for its chance to slash in, the perspicacity is splendid.

In other words :
Very creative
8.5/10

Thank you, that was a admirable paragraph.
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:43 am

The second updated has been added above;

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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  UnknownB®yan™ on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:50 am

READ THE RULES ! - 1 for double posting . THERE'S A HOLY EDIT BUTTON !
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:54 am

Whoops, sorry about that.
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  House on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:55 am

UnknownB®️yan™️ wrote:READ THE RULES ! - 1 for double posting . THERE'S A HOLY EDIT BUTTON !

It's okay, when you update your artwork, you can bump it so other know about it.

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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  UnknownB®yan™ on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:59 am

House wrote:
UnknownB®️yan™️ wrote:READ THE RULES ! - 1 for double posting . THERE'S A HOLY EDIT BUTTON !

It's okay, when you update your artwork, you can bump it so other know about it.

Oh righty . Sorry for that . -+ 1 rep back-
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  BetaNemesis on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:59 am

Not bad, I give it a 7.5/10. Try Making the text more...readable and noticeable.
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Yeti on Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:17 am

It'd make more sense if Will was on it with you at least.

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Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:23 am

@Yeti;

I'd consider that, Thanks :)

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Your right, but I have no space :(
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  Grand Fonic Hymn on Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:14 am

Will can be on the other side of WillMS. and your on the right.
Edit :
Nvm Will's too fat and won't fit
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Post  Settler11 on Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:09 pm

Equilibrium wrote:Will can be on the other side of WillMS. and your on the right.
Edit :
Nvm Will's too fat and won't fit

Bish, +1

It's alrighty,

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Post  Tricks on Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:15 pm

The MapleStory person on the banner isnt really me. I just randomly made him.
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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  House on Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:39 pm

Tricks wrote:The MapleStory person on the banner isnt really me. I just randomly made him.

It can't be you...

My only suggestion is about the fire. It doesn't really fit.

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Post  Yeti on Wed Dec 23, 2009 10:20 pm

House wrote:My only suggestion is about the fire. It doesn't really fit.
Very true. Even if it looks nice, it's still really random.

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Post  Grand Fonic Hymn on Thu Dec 24, 2009 7:01 am

Put will instead of that random guy :P
The fire is the only thing that makes the person, attracted to the banner. Without the fire its just plain boring.
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Post  House on Thu Dec 24, 2009 7:15 am

Equilibrium wrote:Put will instead of that random guy :P
The fire is the only thing that makes the person, attracted to the banner. Without the fire its just plain boring.

I meant replace it; not remove it.

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Re: [Banner] My WillMS Banner.

Post  TrollMoar on Fri Dec 25, 2009 6:50 pm

Equilibrium wrote:I like the articulaticity and simplicity of the amazing artwork you presented, the words project uneasiness in the dark reflection, yet fires adorn and surround the outside, waiting for its chance to slash in, the perspicacity is splendid.

In other words :
Very creative
8.5/10

me no und3rst4nd/
8/10 for me.

It's not really my style though.

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